Practice News Story 1:Accident
On January 17 at about 4p.m. there was a tragic car accident that involved Utah State University kids as
Well as a Professor. The kids were on a field trip for Ag Cultural week visiting a combine headed on
Highway 84 going west. Kyle Holden was there that day but was traveling in a separate vehicle. He said
That he saw some smoke coming from the van and what looked like a blown tire. The van went up on it’s
Two wheels and rolled many times. The 11 Students and 1Professor were all thrown from the van. Evan
Parker, a professor and driver of the van is pronounced dead, as well as 25 year old Steven Bear, Curt
Madison, and Brad Wilcox ( Steven and Brad were pronounced dead at the scene).
Robert Petersen and Jared Nelsen are being held in Ogden Region Medical Center.
We interviewed Noel Crockett USU offical and Dean of Agriculture. Evan mentioned to him that these
Were the cream of the crop, Usu literally losing there best students.
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2 comments:
Your blog was pretty good i thought. Not that I know anything about blogging. If I had to make some pointers, I would say to use actual quotes, use quotation marks maybe. I have not been through the AP style handbook yet, but i think we are supposed to use quotes. Comment on mine too, I could use the help I'm sure haha. See you in class.
Matt Ferris
I liked your story. It showed caring for the people you were writing about. I think there could have been some quotes in there to add authenticity. I liked the statement at the end. Ending with something like that leaves the reader with a little more than just a "blaw" story. Good Job! Cody
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